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notreallyme10 ([info]notreallyme10) wrote,
@ 2009-09-28 09:00:00

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New fic for my friend [info]ahaw9913!
More Than Wanting Part Two

I wrote More Than Wanting for the Clusterfuck challenge and the lovely [info]ahaw9913 asked me to write a second part. So I did! Thanks for everything darling :) I hope you like it!

Thanks to [info]_alicesprings for the beta! You are the best!



He's sitting on my lap with my dick pressed up against his ass. He's grinding against me, slowly building the tension.

"Your cock feels so hot against my skin."

"You're a fucking tease."

He runs his hand through my hair.

"I'm not teasing you Brian."

But he is, because he knows how badly I want it. He knows that it's fucking tearing me up thinking about it.

I'm committed to Justin, that isn't going to change. But neither are my feelings on monogamy. I may not fuck around like I used to, not even close, but I like having the option.

Only, lately the option of putting my bare cock inside his ass is even more appealing.

The tease is him reminding me, yet again, that all I have to do is ask and I can have exactly what I want.

He slides off my lap and then moves my legs apart so he can sit between them.

He takes my cock in his hand.

"I want to watch you come."

His hand is wet with lube and he grips me tight, almost too tight, and when I come we both know what I'm thinking about.

***

He doesn't overtly push me, no matter how much he wants it, but he isn't subtle either.

He blows me, long and slow and so fucking wet. And when he's through he kisses me even wetter, feeding me a mouthful of my own come. When I try to return the favor he tells me to roll over instead.

He rubs his cock against my ass.

"I like your skin against my skin."

And then he jerks off all over my ass and the back of my thighs.

***

I finally give in. Not to him... to myself. Because there is no denying what I really want anymore.

And it isn't like it's hard; I haven't fucked anyone else in months.

I also decide it's time to start teasing back.

***

I have a finger in his ass, fucking him slowly.

"You know what I want?"

His mouth is hanging open, panting slightly. But when he nods, I can see the amusement in his eyes.

Fucker.

So I put my finger on his prostate. Right fucking there and I start to press, lightly at first, but I build the pressure quickly.

"I want to fuck you raw Justin."

That's all it takes. I lap up the come on his stomach and his body jerks lightly each time my tongue comes in contact with his skin.

***

We're both frantic and I wonder briefly if maybe the build-up is going to overshadow the main event. Very briefly.

When I push into him he's so fucking tight and wet. Wet with lube and spit and then my come.

It isn't enough.

I fuck him until I come again and then he fucks me. He rides me hard and when he comes inside me, it feels like we've been doing it wrong all these years.

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[info]the_minx_17
2009-09-28 08:39 pm UTC (link)
Oh. God. That was intense. And, seriously, total last line love for this!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]besamislabios
2009-09-28 08:53 pm UTC (link)
OH MY GOD!

So obscenely hot and naughty!

I loved the second "paragraph", the way they tease each other, and that last line is awesome. :-)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:17 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thank you darling :)

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[info]jule1122
2009-09-28 09:34 pm UTC (link)
So fucking hot! I adore it.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]etextraordinary
2009-09-28 09:42 pm UTC (link)
GUH! I have been trying to come up with coherent and competent feedback for way longer than I care to admit... It is phenomenal.

*is dead*

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:18 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Thank you so much!

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[info]rosy5000
2009-09-28 09:58 pm UTC (link)
Oooo! Hot, sexy and sweet! I love Brian's reaction to everything the most. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]outlander
2009-09-28 10:01 pm UTC (link)
This is why I worship you my dear.
This is smoking hot, fun, and OMG smoking hot.
And then the last line made me wibble.

I think it is quite possible you are trying to kill me with porn.
*nods head very seriously from my puddle on the floor*

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:18 pm UTC (link)
You are too sweet to me :) Thank you!

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[info]nerilka24
2009-09-28 10:28 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Hot stuff :D You capture so well the way they challenge each other. Wonderful!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]_alicesprings
2009-09-29 10:28 am UTC (link)
Yep, that last line is solid GOLD!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you darling!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-29 11:26 am UTC (link)
I love you!

So all day yesterday, this was up on my computer, with my comment box open with "I love you" written in it. I would come back, read this freaking TREASURE again(and again...) figuring I would come up with something better, more original, more something to tell you:

how much I love this,
how fantastic it is,
how fantastic you are,
but, mostly, how THRILLED I am that you wrote this, THIS, for ME!

But, I really couldn't.

I love you, Darling!!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:19 pm UTC (link)
MWAH!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-29 02:50 pm UTC (link)
Apparently, today, I can talk! So I'm back reading this for like the bajillionth time, and I have to pick out some of what it is exactly that is so amazing in this fic, and believe me it is chock full of amazing.

I finally give in. Not to him... to myself.

This is real true Brian! He is a selfish bastard, and if it is gonna work, it HAS to be what HE wants!

I'm committed to Justin, that isn't going to change.

This makes me squee like a schoolgirl!

His mouth is hanging open, panting slightly. But when he nods, I can see the amusement in his eyes.

Fucker.


This is just so perfectly toned. The description, the comedic timing, it's so subtle, yet gives you a million different clues as to what they are saying, doing, thinking.

And dare I say it...

He rides me hard and when he comes inside me, it feels like we've been doing it wrong all these years.

Could there be a more perfect last line? Could anything else slap us in the face with how incandescently perfect this must be, if what we have seen, and know, is wrong?!?

You know I love everything you write. You KNOW this! But, I have to tell you, and not just cause you wrote this for me(which still tickles the shit outta me!), this is absolutely my favorite of all of your writings! It's hot and dirty(yay raw!fic), funny and snarky, and yet so beautifully romantic in a way that only you write! It is PERFECT!

BTW, you posting this yesterday, turned a spectacularly craptastic day into one of the best days I can remember in a long time! I smiled ALL DAY!!!

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!!!!!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-04 08:26 pm UTC (link)
I can't tell you how happy it makes me that you like this! It isn't really what you asked for... so I honestly wasn't sure. I meant for it to be more about the sex itself and it ended up being more of a continuation of the yearning theme.

I'm especially happy that the ending worked for you! I had pretty much the entire thing except for that line for weeks and I was just waiting to figure out the right way to finish. I was expecting it to be more than one line but when it came to me I just felt like it worked.

I love you too darling! Thank you for everything!

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[info]fun_demented
2009-10-17 04:08 am UTC (link)
You are very good at this writing thing. Very good. Wow.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-10-18 12:43 am UTC (link)
This comment just makes me happy :D Thank you!

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[info]cinnytje
2009-11-11 10:11 pm UTC (link)
How on earth is it possible that I'm only now finding out about you and your wonderful stories! I really really thought I read all there is to read (well, all the good stuff anyway) but *yay*, I missed something!

(looking for good fic can be a full time job as I've come to realize during my recent pneumonia/swine flu break from life)

I've read the entire post-513 series today and LOVED it so so so so so much.

And this ... wow, REALLY good!

Off to read more!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-11-18 10:56 pm UTC (link)
I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond!!! But thank you so much! I hope you are feeling much better now :)

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